Saturday, January 18, 2020

Trek Mi Q'an question

I'm trying to figure out what y'all find more helpful: italicization every time you encounter an alien word, no italicization, or a hybrid of the two wherein italics are not used for certain established words centered around time and space. Please pick which of the excerpts below is easiest for you to follow! My thanks in advance :-) Tina/Jaid



A) After the washing was done, Dari moved to a vesha-bench near to her bathing hole. Two Kefa slaves rubbed exotic oils onto her skin whilst another two brushed out her long hair and braided it. The slaves braided with a quickness that humanoid females simply could not, making short work of what would otherwise have been a daunting, Nuba-hours long task.

B) After the washing was done, Dari moved to a vesha-bench near to her bathing hole. Two Kefa slaves rubbed exotic oils onto her skin whilst another two brushed out her long hair and braided it. The slaves braided with a quickness that humanoid females simply could not, making short work of what would otherwise have been a daunting, Nuba-hours long task.

C) After the washing was done, Dari moved to a vesha-bench near to her bathing hole. Two Kefa slaves rubbed exotic oils onto her skin whilst another two brushed out her long hair and braided it. The slaves braided with a quickness that humanoid females simply could not, making short work of what would otherwise have been a daunting, Nuba-hours long task.